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You tore my heart apart
And left me there for dead
Minutes felt like hours
Watching myself as I lied and bled

You turned to look at me
And I looked into those deep eyes
A love so innocent and pure
One I thought would never die

The memories grew heavier
A pain that continued to sear
Every thought and every dream
Everyone brought a single tear

I drew my last few breaths
And over and over, spoke your name
Me beloved, my hated
The one I wanted to blame

This moment lasts forever
As I stare into those eyes
A love we once shared together
Now falls and reaches its demise
©2006-2008 ~xLethalLunacyx
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Something I wrote early in the morning about a certain someone. Haven't bothered to change anything but maybe I will some other time.
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~DiaLomeve:iconDiaLomeve: Nov 22, 2006, 8:47:41 PM Mood: Sympathy
*beloved, my hated
The one I wanted to blame*

Oh I love that part, the entire stanza really. Beautifully put, I know the emotion well.
~xLethalLunacyx:iconxLethalLunacyx: Nov 23, 2006, 7:32:06 AM
Thank you.

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~shamidkpzd:iconshamidkpzd: Nov 24, 2006, 4:59:53 AM
This reminds me of a certain something that happened with a certain person not long ago. *sobs* Okay, I'm over it now. Nice poem. ^^

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~xLethalLunacyx:iconxLethalLunacyx: Nov 24, 2006, 9:24:49 AM
hank you very much. ^_^

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~xLethalLunacyx:iconxLethalLunacyx: Nov 24, 2006, 9:24:53 AM
Thank you very much. ^_^

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*Rashoni:iconRashoni: Nov 24, 2006, 10:00:45 AM
interesting...
Iv'e always wanted to write something like this,
but I can never find the words...
...something that I guess you excell at!

I like it!

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